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Naomi Dahlia by gordonjugah Naomi Dahlia by gordonjugah
Feeling a little uneasy. Well, something out of the blue. Haish, university life...

Tools:
Pencil (Penciling)
Unipin (Inking)
Faber Castell (Coloring)
Adobe Photoshop CS4 (Editing)

Yeah, using a lot of mixed media these days...
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:icondigimonqq:
First off, I really like the colours you used for this drawing, as they match really well.
I can see that you've put a lot of effort into this, and I think that the anatomy is pretty decent.
However, there are a lot of improvements you could make.
The sleeves need size differences, because normal humans have arms that go from thick to thin.
The fingers look pretty natural, except that more details are needed.
As well, the shading for the hair is a bit off.
Usually, hair looks more natural if you shade it like there are strands of hair.
And for the future, maybe moving towards more digital drawings or markers would be nice, since coloured pencils usually come out looking somewhat "dirty" when scanned.
And for lining, maybe you could try a fountain pen or a sakura micron pigma. I used to use a ball point pen for inking, and it just comes out uneven.
Sorry if my critique sounds a bit harsh, but I hope that it will help you improve, as I can see that you do have talent.
Good luck!
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:iconchinaaruu:
chinaaruu Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
nice! :iconloveloveplz:
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a bunch!

And thanks for the fave! Browse my gallery if you have the time!
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chinaaruu Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconenglandgiggleplz: heheh your welcome
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SereneJ Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot! Hope you like it!
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:icontishawish:
I think it's a pretty good try, though you may have to work on the anatomy, on her face especially:aww:
Still, it's good, just keep 'em coming:)
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot for the comment. Well' I'll do my best!
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MorrisonCamaro Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Everywhere, it's green, so much green!

But it looks really good :)
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahaha! Welcome to her green world! Thanks anyways! :D
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:iconwondering-souls:
I really like the outfit design and it's a cute pose. I think you're off to a good start with coloring but you have a lot of white space between your lines. Don't be afraid to fill in that white space ;P Nice job though :D
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