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Naomi Dahlia by gordonjugah Naomi Dahlia by gordonjugah
Feeling a little uneasy. Well, something out of the blue. Haish, university life...

Tools:
Pencil (Penciling)
Unipin (Inking)
Faber Castell (Coloring)
Adobe Photoshop CS4 (Editing)

Yeah, using a lot of mixed media these days...
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First off, I really like the colours you used for this drawing, as they match really well.
I can see that you've put a lot of effort into this, and I think that the anatomy is pretty decent.
However, there are a lot of improvements you could make.
The sleeves need size differences, because normal humans have arms that go from thick to thin.
The fingers look pretty natural, except that more details are needed.
As well, the shading for the hair is a bit off.
Usually, hair looks more natural if you shade it like there are strands of hair.
And for the future, maybe moving towards more digital drawings or markers would be nice, since coloured pencils usually come out looking somewhat "dirty" when scanned.
And for lining, maybe you could try a fountain pen or a sakura micron pigma. I used to use a ball point pen for inking, and it just comes out uneven.
Sorry if my critique sounds a bit harsh, but I hope that it will help you improve, as I can see that you do have talent.
Good luck!
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chinaaruu Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
nice! :iconloveloveplz:
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a bunch!

And thanks for the fave! Browse my gallery if you have the time!
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chinaaruu Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconenglandgiggleplz: heheh your welcome
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SereneJ Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot! Hope you like it!
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Tishawish Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
I think it's a pretty good try, though you may have to work on the anatomy, on her face especially:aww:
Still, it's good, just keep 'em coming:)
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gordonjugah Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot for the comment. Well' I'll do my best!
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MorrisonCamaro Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Everywhere, it's green, so much green!

But it looks really good :)
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gordonjugah Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahaha! Welcome to her green world! Thanks anyways! :D
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wondering-souls Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
I really like the outfit design and it's a cute pose. I think you're off to a good start with coloring but you have a lot of white space between your lines. Don't be afraid to fill in that white space ;P Nice job though :D
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot for the point that I never think of. I'll be sure to see it again in the times to come.
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wondering-souls Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
You're welcome c: Glad I could help :D Best of luck with future projects :)
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jorani2194 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice coloring :)
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot! :D
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Copyright-Wapow Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi again! The background is good, I suggest to lineart your drawings :D
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:icongordonjugah:
gordonjugah Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks! :D Is the lineart for the background? Coz the character is traditionally linearted.
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Copyright-Wapow Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The character must be lineart so it can be more beautiful! :D
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GemmilyArt Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You've got a good understanding of anatomy and colouring, however I think you could benefit from investing in some good tools to make your work look more professional and clean. It's obvious you have lots of talent. :3
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gordonjugah Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Ohh! New media mastery! It's gonna take some time XD! Thanks anyways! I'll do my best!
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GemmilyArt Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem. c:
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